winterlover ([info]winterlover) wrote in [info]no7_awz on January 3rd, 2011 at 01:28 am
Again, this is one of my favourite pieces of writing (as all contributions for Hohoho-fest are) which I will print out and save for reading again and again.

If anything, Deniz’s lack of interest in hashing out all the painful details had been a relief, a chance to set back the clock and put the Marc incident on a back shelf of his mind, labeled, “Mistake, Over.”

But it wasn’t. Just like his feelings for Marc had been slumbering in the background, waiting for the moment they would burst free again, the emotional fallout of his cheating and betrayal lurked under the veneer of happiness and contentment they both worked so hard to maintain.


YES, EXACTLY! *sigh*

It's so beautiful how you describe the night, with Roman waking up so many times and how they both draw nearer to each other, consciously and inconsciously.

“But what if this—“ Deniz waves a hand at the stuff on the table – “just brings back memories? What if this is Marc’s way of winning you back?”

Roman shakes his head. “This is goodbye. He’s letting go of all the parts of me that I’d left behind. I just … I just need to embrace that part of me now. Accept that it’s a part of who I am, who I used to be. And hope that you can embrace it, too.”


I've spent lots of time thinking how this kind of talk could be like, and I shied away from actually manifesting it in my head. But this takes me a bit further in the storyline, but also leaves so much space for my own thoughts - wonderful.
I almost like it now that Show left so much open, un-shown, so that stories like this can be produced and I can close my eyes and "watch" everything in my imagination.
 
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