Well, that was not what I expected. What a great surprise! Loved the way Draco learns to protect his mind. I had always wondered how Occlumency worked. Your use of imagery was very satisfying.
And though I hated him when he was a bully, I find at the end I have hope for him, that now he's a 'failure', he will learn to be more human. I think that may be what Andrew has in mind. I think Draco will appreciate those lessons as well. (Snicker)