Gahhh, I love your Ron voice, that just seems so much how he would think. I adore his habit vs. tradition vs. whatever, and how Ron mentions Hermione always having the appropriate words for things. It is just so very THEM. asldfkj wonderful. I think you've worked it so brilliantly that the adultury isn't really upsetting at all, because this is something that's between Harry and Ron and Hermione, just once a year, and they're the trio and somehow it just WORKS.
the kind that gets so pissed that they wake up in a puddle in a Knockturn Alley ditch at seven in the morning with their hair in pink and blue streaks, wondering why they're wearing a dragonhide kilt and mismatched boots.
AHAHAHAHAHA SUCH a great line. Really, so many wonderful moments in this fic. ♥♥♥
This is just gorgeously written--I can't think of a thing that doesn't work here. So fabulous. THANK YOU SO SO SO SO MUCH, mystery author!