However, I don't really feel like the emotions follow an objective correlative...
"The only way of expressing emotion in the form of art is by finding an 'objective correlative'; in other words, a set of objects, a situation, a chain of events which shall be the formula of that particular emotion." T.S. Elliot
It's a very small problem in an otherwise fantastic fic, though! :-)))
(Also, sorry for posting an anonymous comment, but I don't have an IJ...)