Oh! *delightedly claps hands* Well done! So well done!
This was so much fun, and I laughed out loud in so many spots. You had such a great handle on surly teenagers. I LOVE mature!Harry, and you did him wonderfully, and exasperated!Draco was a delight. I really enjoyed how well you fleshed out the kids.
I think my favourite line was "Oww! Stop doing that—no, wait, never mind. Do it again." Hahaha!
Thank you so much, whoever you are. This was everything I could have hoped for!