Dear Secret Santa, that was a thoroughly enjoyable read! I loved it. :-)
First, let me say that I'm so happy you chose to wrote Harry/Lucius. As some have already mentioned--wow, a Harry/Lucius that's not noncon and you wrote it well and convincingly. Your portrayal of Lucius was interesting and endearing, still sly, self-serving, and with his all of his aristocratic air, yet tellingly weathered from the war (and, it would seem, whatever came after), a softer (though fittingly so) version. And I enjoyed Harry just as much! Even affected by amnesia, he was still Harry, personality intact. They both felt like whole characters.
I adored so many lines in this fic!
A few (of many) that made me laugh out loud:
He didn't know what to think of him, other than he looked angry, in a tall, blonde and attractive sort of way.
He seems sort of selfish and sarcastic. Then again, maybe I like selfish and sarcastic.
And several that were just delicious in their poignant, wry observations:
Truth was merely information best dealt out in moderation.
Ignorance wasn't bliss, but it was certainly more comfortable to live with.
And the precursor to the sex that came later ("Hey! That's…cold, really, you know…" The complaints faded as Lucius, inspired by whatever devil it was that inhabited his psyche, slid his icy fingers inside Harry's shirt and pinched his nipples..."Umm, ouch. That's sort of…do I…do we…" Potter trembled, but didn't move away. "Are we...that way?") was as hot and thrilling as the act itself--which was so hot, so thrilling, so very squee-worthy, and yeah. Just good. Guh. So well-done.
Your dialogue, too, was full of awesome; the exchanges between Harry and Lucius read so naturally. This entire fic just read naturally, smoothly. I really was engaged from the very beginning. And I'll sure to be rereading it again!
Thank you so much for my gift, Secret Santa! I love it and I'm so glad you were assigned to write for me. I hope you're enjoying the holidays!