PERFECT Marauders in every way! I woke up and read this first thing and now my day is destined to be good.
Being partial to Remus myself, I loved how when you got to his POV, I thought, "Okay, now we'll hear the *truth*," and everything about his tone confirmed that he felt the same way I did, all grand sighs and let me set the record straight attitude. I loved it! And I adored seeing him in action as a prefect.
Oh, and Remus silently wanking and staring down James and Sirius is the first version is asAKLHD;OSDLKjsljd! Whee!