I really liked the concept of the afterlife in this fic - I don't think I've ever read a fic quite like this before and I find it very original and interesting. It's fun because you're not solving the problem of dead canon characters by bringing them to life by various magical means, but instead you created this afterlife setting that was perfect for the story :). I really liked the characterisation of both protagonists. The joy that Remus felt when he found he was no longer a werewolf was quite moving - I like that he still felt the need to run about the forest when there was full moon :)