Thank you mystery writer! This was totally wonderful. I enjoyed it tremendously. I like a story that has a plot that pulls you in and this one completely did.
I also loved the slow build of Harry and Draco's relationship. I'm all about a relationship that actually progresses, like it does in real life. I liked that they had to work together, but that they didn't have the same job.
I totally bought the characterizations of both Harry and Draco. That's a big thing for me. I want to recognize the characters, and you totally hit both of them.
And I hate to admit how much I could see Harry hitting Draco like that because he was completely flustered. That worked as much as them kissing.
I loved the kids. Albus was just wonderful. Scorpius, too.
I also liked the fact that you didn't vilify Ginny, which too many fics do. She was just like her mother, and that is such a valid characterization. I liked that she realized that Albus was better off with Harry at the end.
And did I mention how much I liked the plot? I loved all the little magical details. Magical Forensics! Oh, how I loved that idea. And you had some really clever details about it, too. Well done.
And lest I forget, fumbling sex in the back of a car! Wow, that was hot and so perfect for them.
Thanks you so much for a wonderful story. I'm about to start reading it again.