Breathplay. mph. Hot. Oh good, I was afraid it was too mild to really qualify. It's one of my favorite kinks, though rarely used I think...
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<i>Breathplay. mph. Hot.</i> Oh good, I was afraid it was too mild to really qualify. It's one of my favorite kinks, though rarely used I think...
<I'm a sucker for present tense, but there was something elegant about a lot of your phrasing. And contrasted against Ron's rough dirty talk. Ohh, yes.>
Present tense is the easiest to connect with, it draws us in more (imho), though maybe I've just made that up because I'm a sucker for it too. : ) It was really difficult finding the right tone for this story, balancing how I imagine Ron's voice with my own voice and the dirty talk -- it's really nice to know it worked, Thank you!