Gah where has my previous comment disappeared off to? Hmpf.
Excellent. This was dark and edgy and unforgiving, just what I've been craving lately. asdfghjk the breathplay, and Remus whoring himself out for Wolfsbane and being in a completely lost place emotionally, and Severus (RAWR!), and god this is so rich and there's so much lying beneath and just overall *keyboardsmash*. Very well done! Lucky Lee :)