That was so hot and so wonderful that I kicked myself for waiting so long to read it. I can hardly express what I liked most - the way you took two just-name characters and turned them into personalities that are so vivid they practically jump off the page... The way they are recognisable in an almost-Marauder sense with Teddy like a gentler vision of Sirius, mischievous without a darks side, with Tonks's easy cheerfulness and a lot of Remus's gentle but devious traits. I so loved that aside about him not caring about his clothes - it's so Remus! And James was wonderful - there is something recognisably Harry and old!James about him and his insecurity. And I loved the way he's bowled over by lust throughout :).
And the porn... omg, delicious! I can be pretty skittish about rimming, but it was amazing and hot as hell here (giving me this vague suspicion about who you *might* be, mystery ruler of pr0n), and not just that, *everything*. The open door, and Teddy's effortless sensuality, and James's reactions and the writing throughout - absolutely gorgeous! The hottest piece of this year's Smutmas, I think (having not read everything yet, but finding it hard to imagine anything hotter). I loved this to bits and pieces - thank you!!!