I really enjoyed this! I loved what you did with the Elder Wand - great plot, very interesting. I could so see Harry feeling like that about his life. The sex was hot and it was refreshing to see a top!Draco. But mostly, I enjoyed Snape giving orders to both of them. When he appeared as a portrait in the spare room a grin of delight split my face.
The Boy Who Crawled *snicker* Snape going to give a report to Dumbledore made me snicker more!
And I loved that meta kind of reference to the Epilogue at the end - JKR writing about a future that hasn't happened yet. And maybe it never happened. Yes, I like that thought. *g*