I don't have a LiveJournal... mostly because I don't know how to work it. I followed the link on Lulabelle72's Deviant Art page. I'm so very glad that she rec'd it. This is the first fic that I read where Severus is a Submissive. Now I truly understand what BDSM is. And found that I really like reading it.
I like how you're telling this story from SS and HG's POV. I feel very sad for the both of them because of what they endured in their pasts. You're doing a wonderful job portraying their emotions. I really can't wait to read more.