Concrit Offer Meme!

The activity check/how's my driving meme is in a week, and I know there are a lot of people here who want crit they haven't been receiving, and people that are very good at giving crit to those who want it. If you fall into either category, this meme is for you!

Those who want crit, fill out the form below for a character you want crit for, post it in a comment, and repeat with every character you feel you need help with.

For those who are giving crit: DO NOT reply with your crit here. Wait for the game-wide HMD, or go to the player's personal HMD post. However, you are welcome to leave a comment, anon or otherwise, nothing that you're looking over their threads and putting together crit.

Character:
Tag: ♈
What you'd like crit on: Just what it says. Grammar, tagging speed, characterization, even icon use! Whatever you feel is lacking, list here. Feel free to also mention problems you're already aware of as well, if you'd like crit-givers to focus elsewhere.
Preferred method of delivery: Personal HMD, or game-wide HMD? Anon'd or not? Or do you want the crit-giver to do whatever makes them feel most comfortable?

<b>Character:</b> <b>Tag:</b> <a href="http://asylums.insanejournal.com/marinasylum/tag/NAME+HERE">♈</a> <b>What you'd like crit on:</b> <b>Preferred method of delivery:</b>

As a final note, I'd like to request that no one completely say 'no I won't accept crit in this form' to a particular method. While you are certainly welcome to name your preference, the spirit of the meme is to encourage well-written, well thought-out crit that will be regarded fairly, regardless of the method of delivery.