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stonegrad (stonegrad) wrote in malfoycentric,
@ 2007-11-28 06:49:00

Entry tags:

author: stonegrad, character: draco, character: lucius, character: scorpius, pairing: lm/dm, rating: nc-17, slash, type: fic

Fic - For Evermore
Title: For Evermore (We Were The Last Ones Standing)
Author/Artist: stonegrad
Characters: Lucius, Albus-Severus, Scorpius, Draco, Harry, Hermione...
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Chan, incest, consensual sexual exploits of the underage nature, semi!public wall!frottage, a blindfold, rimming, loads of biting, slight glove fetish, UST, first time, some rough love, angst, and a severe lack of innocence.
Compliant to: DH, up to and including parts of the epilogue
Archive: No.
Notes: Written for NaNo 07.
Summary: Albus Potter was always going to be different - his family just didn't realize how much...

The fake cut road of absolute insanity.

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faerie_lullaby
2007-11-28 09:00 pm UTC (link)

Wow.

This was absolutely beautiful. The imagery was amazing, the wording spectacular, the characterization simply astounding. You put so much detail into this, and I love the glove fetish, it makes it seem all the more real. The bits of history you threw in was a nice touch, and I liked the fact that Hermione was so supportive of what Albus was going through, and so understanding of what he wanted. You've done such a wonderful job, my dear, and I hope to see more from you.

Can I just say that you deserve a round applause?

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stonegrad
2007-11-28 10:46 pm UTC (link)

-blush-

The great thing about Albus is that there's not a lot to go off, so you can spin him whichever way you want and build him up from nothing (and the Malfoys, well, they're pretty much all I write, so I'm pretty aware of how they work in my mind - just good to know someone else likes them!)

I'm so glad you liked the glove fetish! That just kind of crept out of me and into the story, and I thought it suited Albus quite well; and Hermione is pretty open-minded, though she didn't know exactly what was going on as far as what Lucius and Albus were doing (I'm amusing myself with imagining the Weasley's reactions at the end, heh).

Man, I'm actually smiling so widely it's starting to hurt. You have no idea how good it makes me feel to know that slogging through November on the last of the coffee and far too little sleep actually managed to produce something that someone likes - and here I was, thinking I would shove it into a drawer because no one would like it.

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faerie_lullaby
2007-12-01 12:38 am UTC (link)

I would imagine the Weasley's to be horrifically shocked out of their minds. They wouldn't know how to take it. The glove fetish was beautiful. I don't think he would be Lucius without his gloves, it wouldn't seem right.

I can tell you worked hard on this, it really shows. Take a nap, rejuvenate yourself. I'm sure others will like it, it was way too good to stop reading. I'm glad it managed to please you.

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	stonegrad 2007-12-01 10:32 pm UTC (link)
	Yeah, me too - it's an amusing picture. And I have a thing for Lucius and his gloves... such fetishy accessories that man has! Thanks! (Reply to this) (Parent)

nonajf
2007-12-03 01:06 am UTC (link)

Gah! It's taken me several days to read this and digest it.

I loved it! It's so original; I'd never considered pairing Lucius with Albus (the Younger? SP?). They work really well together.

How weird am I that throughout reading this I kept flashing to being an introvert living in an extrovert world? I related so well to Albus living in a noisy, bright world that didn't understand him, and didn't want to. It's nice to see a dysfunctional Potter family! (A nice way to incorporate the epilogue and the Harry/Ginny decree from on high (JKR) and turning it all around.)

Albus (and Scorpius) are going to have so much fun in their final year. (They will, too. And will really annoy most everyone else by not be repentant.)

And, I admit, the chan was hot. Ahh, Lucius. . .

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stonegrad
2007-12-03 03:23 am UTC (link)

Thank you so much! I will admit, Lucius and Albus have been a sort of guilty pleasure for me ever since DH came out; I love the possibly for corruption - the change from awkward, Severus-esque Albus into something so much colder and clearcut. Ahhh, it's just so much fun to write.

I think this is the first time I've ever written H/G when Harry wasn't having an affair and the marriage wasn't teetering on divorce. I don't think it will happen again soon, either ^^ It's just plain odd for me.

Seventh Year would just be incredible for the pair of them, especially since the whole world will know just who Albus Potter goes home to during the holidays. It amuses me to no end, it really does (that, and the sheer madness of what would be going down in the Potter/Weasley households...)

And I'm also very happy you like Lucius. He makes me a very proud fanfic writer, because he's just so absurdly fun to use - also glad you didn't mind the chan, by the way!

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	blacksilver09 2007-12-24 08:48 am UTC (link)
	The longest one-shot I've read so far. And absolutely heart wrenching. You make us sympathize with the feelings of Albus Severus Potter. The development is beautiful. Your writing led me to a story of obsession. And as of now I feel as if I'm as obsessed with Lucius as Albus were in this story. I loved and still love the story.. very... very.. very.. much. <333 Merry Christmas (Reply to this)