"Wear a bra! What are you, a lesbian?" I love it. And I love Shane and her barely-there breasts. She's delicious within her androgeny.
The scene between Marina and Jenny - I loved it. This line: "[...]she let Marina dress her up like a mannequin in lace and silk and softness," put beautiful images in my mind.
You're a great writer! Thanks for posting this and welcome to the community!