Feedback, Innerslytherin gets her own part - SPOILERS! innerslytherin - Okay, wow. You've done an amazing job of portraying their relationship over a number of years – I always like to read missing scenes or between times, and you have so much … life in there… happiness and sadness, content and discontent, togetherness and separation. Remus as Dumbledore's assassin was fascinating and rough, as well as the intimation that Dumbledore purposely tried to drive Severus toward the Death Eaters, knowing that he'd return. The dynamic between Voldemort and Severus was so well done, with V actually enjoying Severus' hatred of him.
I also loved how you worked in and around canon details, and got so involved in the story that I forgot that you wrote it before DH came out. I was cringing and waiting for Remus' sudden marriage, and had the craziest sense of relief when it hit me that it diverged from canon after HBP. Whew!
Once again, I sincerely dislike Dumbledore and his blatant manipulation of everyone… and I wanted to shake Remus when he was ignoring Severus in favor of his father. At first I didn't like Moody too much, but by the end, when I realized that he'd covered for Remus and Severus, I liked him very much. :) And the ending was great, with both of them determined not to live in secrets anymore, and to be together, no matter what.