Feedback, part 2 - SPOILERS FOR ZINE FICS bronze_ribbons - *flail* Wow. I'm really having trouble coming up with enough words to say how much I love this fic. You do such an amazing job of building the world and Severus' life after the end of the war, and the meeting with Remus and the slow build of realizing that Remus is still active in resistance. Gooch was a fantastic character, and the way Remus allowed Diana/Tonks to take her anger out on him was so very like him… Love the ending – I always seem to really like endings that end as something is beginning, as it is here. :)
moonycakes - Too cute! Poor Severus looks all grumpy at having his storming-away interrupted. – and I love the candles on the diagonal, hovering in the air.
ellid - I love that Remus knew all along!! *cough* Okay, now I've gotten that out of my system. Severus' dad popping onto the scene was great, and the wedding was very sweet. I liked Enid and Toby very much, and loved how Enid came after Severus with the potion. :) Poor Severus and the nausea… but my favorite is the ending. I love when Severus is trying to be sneaky and Remus knows, but goes along to make Severus happy. *g*
stasia - Such a fascinating plot… the magic you've created is really interesting, both the curse and the bond. I liked Harry and Severus working together to save Remus, and how Severus figured out how Remus had survived so long… and the ending was wonderful, and full of so much hope and love for their future.
neodandiesrule - Lovely… the swirl of the robes, and the way Severus' face is turned to Remus…
bronze_ribbons - Oh, Tonks. So happy that she went out taking all of them with her, and all the transfigurations of the frilly things was great… Favorite lines:
Aloud, she said to Snape, “Over my dead body.”
Snape sneered at that. “Is there a live one that’s escaped our notice?”
I do adore Severus. *cracks up* I do like Tonks, especially when she's written as well as this, and that she had to resolve things with Remus and Severus before moving on was just right. The ending was perfectly bittersweet.
ebonyserpent - *laughs* They both look so content! So sweet…
arionrhod and McKay – Just… fantastic. You two are so good at writing together, and I love the format of the letters and how they reveal the story. And with the last set, I can just picture them sitting or lying together, taking turns writing on a piece of paper… :) Your writing always leaves me feeling content and happy.
Tagay - osmalic, zhynchan, and Sin – Fantastic art all around, but I have to say your Remus is so amazingly perfect. His face is so expressive, his stubble is sexy, and his movements… mmmm. I love the image of him on page 120 with that so-hopeful expression. The ending is heartbreaking and perfect, with Severus' ornament breaking/burning…
xterm - Definitely a perfect back cover, the yin and yang of Severus and Remus… so different, yet so similar and together, they are perfect.