This is definitely my favorite chapter in the piece. If I were to tell you all my favorite bits, I would probably end up retyping the whole thing. It's just so sad that Severus sees himself as so unworthy that he can't possibly imagine himself as the one Remus loves. Remus has the world's worst timing, too. Finally pulling together his courage, and Severus will have to kill Dumbledore and any possibility of a romantic relationship. Time to apply AU.