I am so in love with that child!!! Your portrayal of him as an intelligent-but-still-so-very-young wizard is really heartwarming and a very nice setting for what is pretty much a fairly frightful tale. It could so easily have dipped into a much darker version, but I loved his voice and the way he saw the world. So many really lovely touches in there too, like Teddy wondering whether he'd have scars like Remus, or that he didn't turn his hair red for too long since Severus didn't like the Weasleys. Such love!