*stares* Oh man, my little ficlet isn't anywhere near as magnificent as this is, yet it's just how I imagined them! Remus so gleefully enthusiastic and Severus burrowing into his scarf, only moving it aside when he quickly pops a piece in his mouth. I love how wolfish Remus looks, like it's totally around "his time of the month", and how wan Sev looks. I especially like how Severus' shoulders are leaning away from Remus, but his waist, hips and knees are curved into him.
The trees are amazing and worth all your hard work, because they really give the piece a sense of place. But your faded bench work is equally stunning and adding to the overall sense of "quiet park".
I would be honoured if you would allow me to put your piece with my story on my fic community and possible web page.(?) And maybe you'll consider archiving it at Moonshadow some day? I haven't put in the ficlet yet, but I plan on it. I'm certainly already honoured, just by your choosing my piece to illustrate so expertly.