I adored the bits when they were children chasing frogspawn and such. :) The non-con made me shiver, as all good non-con does, but I liked the comfort you gave them after the hurt. I love how Lily was the one who did the chasing, and also was the one who brought Severus out of himself and helped him heal. I liked the idea of Lily making Severus keep the horrible memory bottled instead of reabsorbing it. I also like that it ended on a hopeful note for the future. Nicely done!