This is so very intense and believable and I just love it! I love the extra scenes that fit so very well into canon, like the first kiss; what a sweet, heartseizing scene you describe there! Your writing put me right were things were happening, I felt the atmosphere you created all around me and could smell the grass on the playground, the rain hanging heavy in the air... you, mystery author, are brilliant, and I'll have to stalk you once the reveals are up! <3 <3 <3