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Hans Ernst Varner (heil_hans) wrote in la_vie_ooc,

Rejected for the following reasons:

1. No character is 'flawless' in appearance. Please revise appearance section.

2. Grammatical issues in first person sample. Please revise.

"Paris is truly a jewelry of a city. I might have spent my youth here, but I could not appreciate its many beautiful beauties as a child."

there lives = their lives
reading the daily reports / makes, not make
there letters = their letters

Please feel free to correct the issues with the application and try again!

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