I agree with the anon above! I adore your two characters. You really seem to grasp their personalities and play them really well. I'm loving Tomoyo's threads in her intro, and I love seeing Subaru around more lately. Both of them are really fun to see in the masquerade, as well.
You're doing a great job and I honestly don't have any crit to offer. I'm really glad that you joined this game and that you're having fun. I really love reading your threads.