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Finally, I’d like to see Kamui interact more with castmates regarding his feelings. He’s good with threading with Yuzu and Sorata (probably because those two can lead the threads better than, say, Arashi or Kakyou). But is Kamui in a relationship with Keiichi? I see them interacting, but that’s about it. What about Fuuma? What about Kotori? I realize that Fuuma is relatively new, so there are less chances to deal with issues there. But Kotori has been around for years. And other than a small thread in Kotori’s last entry, I don’t know if I’ve ever seen Kamui tag Kotori’s entries. Why isn’t there more interaction there? Where does Kamui stand right now regarding Kotori, or Fuuma, or Keiichi, or Subaru? These things seem very conspicuous in their absence in MC.
Kaza comes across as rather one-dimensional to me. I think it’s fun to have him spaz, but it seems like all he’s doing is freaking out and yelling. Kaza does do more than flail. He has serious moments, serious interactions with people. I think that, at the moment, those are lacking in your interactions with them. Most of the time, I see Kaza yelling at Riku or Koryuu, and that’s about it. It’d be great to see him branch out more, maybe use his powers to get to know people better, have connections with them, etc. Right now, he seems rather one-track. That, and the transition between him freaking out and going back to normal seems very abrupt, and vice versa. He could be normal one moment and then screaming the next, and it’s a little hard to follow. I don’t think it’s wrong, necessarily, but maybe seeing more of that transition could help it seem less awkward. Also, maybe using thoughts in brackets to illustrate his inner thoughts could help, too, and also help give the other character something to respond to.
I feel like, hiatuses aside, Eagle has been around more, overall. I think that’s great, and I hope to see more of him in the future. Sometimes I think you have a tendency to rely too much on event replays with him, but seeing him around being ^_^-y is always lots of fun. His cr is really fun, and I love his interactions with ccs-Sakura and Hikaru.
Overall, I think these are little things that are easily fixed, and will improve as well as your activity builds up. I know that you have a lot of rl stuff right now, so this isn’t a HOW DARE YOU NOT BE DOING THIS but rather just a wish that there were more opportunities for you to play with everyone. Every-one you play is amazing, overall, and overall, you’re a fantastic player.