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Mods of Kiseki RPG ([info]kiseki_mods) wrote in [info]kiseki_rpg,
@ 2015-04-30 10:30:00

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Entry tags:concrit meme, meme, mod post, ooc

Concrit meme - Take 82!
Time for our monthly How's My Driving meme!

- Comment to this post with a list of your characters. You may add any commentary you'd like, such as things you'd wish to get feedback on.

- Reply anonymously to the other players, giving concrit on how they're playing/their characterization/their interactions/etc.

- 100% negative comments will get screened/frozen/deleted, and can be grounds for banning if they're bad enough. Game rules apply here as well, so don't use it as an excuse to insult others. How can you tell the difference between giving crit and bashing? The second has no purpose. Giving crit means you want things to improve - by clearing out a misunderstanding of a character's actions, by helping a player manage activity better, by pointing out where characterization might be off, etc. If there are issues with a character that go beyond what giving crit would do (either characterization issues or something else), talk it out personally with the player, or with us mods instead.

- Simply giving positive feedback is just fine! Of course, we encourage these to be as elaborate as possible, as it's always better to get an idea of why a character/player is doing things right.

This is non-mandatory! If you aren't comfortable with the HMD, or don't feel like posting every time, or whatever the reason is, you don't have to post to it. However, don't be that person who gives crit to others and then doesn't open up for crit themselves.

On that same line of thought - we're a small game! If nobody comments, then the meme doesn't work. If you receive comments, try to leave at least one of your own to somebody else. It's always better if we have many replies, and various POVs.



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[info]profail
2015-04-30 01:40 pm UTC (link)
Aramis ([info]thestare)
Milady de Winter ([info]youstillwearit)
Merlin ([info]partofmycharm)
Neal Cassidy | Baelfire ([info]darkonejr)
Tsubasa 'Syaoran' Li ([info]fukutsunokokoro)
Shinah ([info]moonlitpkyuu)

Any feedback on the new charas now they've done a little more than just intro would be great!

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[info]becomeashield
2015-04-30 01:56 pm UTC (link)
Zeno ([info]becomeashield)

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(Anonymous)
2015-05-08 05:42 pm UTC (link)
He's a wonderful little troll and I'm enjoying all of his threads so much, it's clear you know his character inside-out. Can't wait to see more of him!

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[info]becomeashield
2015-05-11 12:53 pm UTC (link)
I completely forgot to reply to this. Asgfghs, thank you! ♥

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[info]mindmywound
2015-04-30 03:33 pm UTC (link)
Isabela // [info]sixthings
Korra // [info]bridgebetween
Arthur Pendragon // [info]insibbegerest
Sakura | Tsubasa // [info]returnedfeather
Porthos du Vallon // [info]mindmywound
Snow White | Mary Margaret Blanchard // [info]alwaysfind


I got some well-needed crit last month about Korra not being as involved, and I've definitely tried to throw her out a little more. Would love to get feedback on whether it's been better or about the same in terms of her activity. Other than that, anything you might have to note would be great!

/posts this at 8:33 just to make Ana cry

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[info]remembrances
2015-04-30 06:11 pm UTC (link)
jamie moriarty | [info]jeuxvoyant
stiles stilinski | [info]sparking
constance bonacieux | [info]goodanswer
bucky barnes | [info]remembrances

I don't know how well I've managed with re: the crit I got on Jamie the last time, but character involvement-wise I've tried to tag new CR or CR that hasn't been as developed, and also not drop older threads so quick, so I'd love to hear if it has worked at all or if there's still more I should do! Any kind of feedback is of course much appreciated, as always.

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(Anonymous)
2015-05-03 11:00 pm UTC (link)
I'm the anon from last month and I wanted to be sure to say that I've definitely noticed an improvement on all the points. I think you definitely took it to heart and it's definitely showing: your characters seem present and tagging old and new CR without it seeming to overwhelm you, and it's been great to see all your commentary and thoughts on plurk, as well as the plotting posts.

I really don't have anything to add other than it's wonderful to see everybody around. In regards to Jamie, I've definitely noticed her around more, too. Understandably she's never going to be as social in threads as, say, Constance or Bucky might be, but I've definitely noticed her in threads.

So overall, great job! I love stalking your characters as well as playing with them, and you see to have hit your groove.

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[info]sparking
2015-05-04 04:29 pm UTC (link)
Ahhh, thank you, Anon! ;~~; I'm really happy to hear this -- I know something like fixing up activity issues and starting to build new CR isn't something that happens in, say, a week, but I'm glad that whatever little I've done to try and be more active and involved is showing. I'm definitely going to keep working on staying active with my characters!

As for Jamie, yeah, that's definitely a thing with her, that she's not really super sociable and some events that are good for casual mingling just aren't for her - but if she's at least seemed to be around somewhat more frequently than before, that's already good!

In any case, thank you so much for taking the time to comment, I'll do my best not to disappoint on this front in the future ♥

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(Anonymous)
2015-05-04 09:39 pm UTC (link)
I agree with the points raised here, the activity improvement is definitely noticeable and giving out great results. Good work.

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[info]chickwithwifi
2015-04-30 06:28 pm UTC (link)
Felicity Smoak ([info]chickwithwifi)

She's still new yet, but if anyone has feedback on her so far, please let me know ^^

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[info]aguidinglight
2015-05-02 11:25 pm UTC (link)
Yukine | [info]aguidinglight
Freya | [info]andalake
Kija | [info]whiteclaw

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(Anonymous)
2015-05-02 11:44 pm UTC (link)
You're doing great with your characters, and I feel you've done a fantastic job working on the points that were brought up last time! Your top-levels (and tags, in general) have improved so much and are a lot easier and more fun to engage with.

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[info]whiteclaw
2015-05-03 07:00 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much! I'm glad I was able to get better with last month's concrit!

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