adjdsklf; \;A;/ Thank you so much! I'm so so happy to hear (read?) all of that fff
I am very relieved the fight didn't read totally awkwardly ahaha ;; A- and I love making him a jerk and yes, totally agree on that pfft. Subaru baby why sob. I'm glad it comes across as... er... IC-jerkness, rather than being too over-the-top or forced or something.
AND SOB I KEPT WORRYING SO MUCH ABOUT EXACTLY THAT WHILE PLAYING THOSE THREADS WITH FAY you have no idea how \;;;A;;;/ I am to hear that it wasn't the case. Fay does very easily become attention-grabbing and all so I was constantly fretting over balance with that orz. Thank you so much for commenting on it gjdk;kfds;
Yay about Riku (there's still more FEELS~*~ to sort out, yes. And if Robin does indeed bring back Mermaid it'll be even more of a mess. Oh, this soap-opera...), I liked being able to take that step into, okay, so I do kind of care >_>;; but he wouldn't suddenly go all OMG ILU!11 at this point, so. yeah. that. It was fun.
And double-yay about Kokuyou \:D/ I still have to work on his CR but I'm glad it's working so far. And lol yes he's so ridiculously sappy fff. I keep cracking up when I tag with him |DD;
Ahhh it's okay, thank you for leaving this \;3;/ It's still very helpful even if it's not, omg fix this or that.