Phux
Compelling is a good word for it, yes. I can see how a couple of small, otherwise innocuous changes in the right place could make it a good deal stronger. But then, you've always been better at that than I have. I'm sure things will come out in the doing, as they often have the tendency to.
I don't think it would surprise anyone if I put your name forward for representation of our little group, but it's good to know where you want to be placed when I do. I didn't know whether you had the time or the inclination for such things here. As for our other representative, I still haven't made my decision, personally, but as long as you had the desire it was always going to be you foremost anyhow. I suppose that was expected.