sweety, i love this but i think that she is a little too young. i'd make her older and change the dialogue a bit to suit it. a horny ten year is just a little too wrong. pluse that means that the twins are like thirteen and jaking off? i dunno but that seems a little too early as well... but otherwise, i love the idea, i love the story and i want you to keep going please!!
one down six to go lmfao i loved that line. i also loved that she went to bill first, her faveroite. much love! ~Sara, Via-Livejournal.
p.s. the make sure your a human thing spells 'pussy' and some numbers lmfao coincidence? i think not.