Stumbled across the masterlist totally by accident, and had to have a peek. This is evil! And great! So very IC Snape, both with Hermione and with Harry, knowing just which buttons to push, and wow, Harry isn't even *broken* or anything - just mentally trapped in a reality that is absolutely wrong, and responding to it rationally, and wow!
I *love* that scenario! True essence of mindfuck ;). *hugs*