coffee_n_cocoa told me to come over and read, so I did. Definitely not disappointed.
Harry/Neville is one of those great and w00bie loves of mine, and you got them both. Harry charging into situations half-assed -- despite being an Auror who should know better -- but still managing to make it through, albeit in this case with his, ahem, virtue sullied. Neville, a bit like Hermione with his vast knowledge of plants, getting the two of them through. Yet both so uncertain of themselves. *pets*