I've never seen Moody get so loved on. Whoever you are, you did an incredible, impeccable job of fleshing him out so brilliantly. Percy was an excellent narrator, telling us more about Moody than the man himself ever does. I also loved the moment of insight into Percy's conflict with his family (if I were Fred or George, who break the law on a weekly basis, or Ron or Ginny who broke into the bloody Ministry – you wouldn't be asking me that) - you just touched upon it, but you encapsulated the entire issue so beautifully in that one short sentence.
This was utterly brilliant, and while it has been recced several times already, I, too, am doing the same. VERY well done, dear author.