Oh wow! I'm so glad Flora pointed to this, or I'm sure I would have missed it. What great characterisations throughout! OMG Dom!Moody - what a great idea! I agree with Percy about the being hot and bothered after the meeting in the alley. *g* This passage is so awesome -
Percy tries very hard not to think about being pushed up against a brick wall. He tries not to think about that hand clapped tightly over his mouth, and a threatening whisper in his ear, and the sharp, twisting excitement in his stomach. It doesn't work. "Do you have an appointment?"
Moody plants his hands on the desk, leaning in so close that Percy swallows hard. "Do you think I have an appointment?"
Just - *cackles*. They are both so perfect!! And Moody immediately sensing what Percy wants. Just. SO IC OMG. Also, so much love for the canon tie-in, and Percy confiding in Bill. *sob* Fantastic!