Okay, I am a seriously lucky girl today, because I get early gifties in TWO fests. And suffices isn't the word.
I love this. Like, a lot. You went for the unusual, for one thing, and I like that, and then you take Moody seriously, not as the caricature that demands constant vigilance and has a peg leg and a wild eye. And even though he's not, especially, a particular favorite of mine--no, I know I did ask for him, and I wasn't kidding or anything, just, I wasn't so sure if I got him it would be this whole character that made a ton of sense, and I especially much like any fic that takes its own premise and works from it, you know?
I also like that you give us wee Percy with the flu and needy Percy in the office and flustered-humiliated teenage Percy following his dad and desperate Percy at home. And holy crap I love that you gave him Bill to big his big brother like that. I didn't ask for that, but I like it a whole lot.
*runs off to point at my presents* *commences waiting FOREVER to find out who you are because nothing made me go OH I KNOW WHO (dammit)*