Oh, my god. This was just amazing. I don't even have words for it, but I was drawn in from the very start and I haven't stopped reading for the past hour. I'll have to go back and re-read before I leave a thorough comment, but really - brilliant job. All the interactions felt real, not staged or forced. And I love the way it was written, so sparse and intense, simple yet complex. Reading it completely made my day.