*sorry for the late reply been stuck in the OZ bushfires*
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the structure - I seem to be the way i write now, wierd timelines and structure etc.
Also glad you liked Luna - i'm never sure if i've got a handle on her or only just my way of seeing her with dean and seamus. i've written a couple of other bits and bobs for this fic on my journal - neville makes more of an appearance in those.