I really like this. It's great to see Millicent written like this because people usually shy away from writing smut about the less conventionally attractive characters, but you've used it to good effect here. I like this I'd rather be a fat cow than a stupid bitch," Millicent snarls then, but Pansy is already gone. & the significance of Pansy asking her to undress in the final scene, because both the request & Millicent's compliance are so significant. Great job!