THANK YOU! You made me do a happy dance. And flail. I may even have giggled. I am thrilled to hear that the structure and plot worked. The two women sneaking off just seemed inevitable to me after witnessing that. :). It was so much fun to imagine each of the pairings and how they would be together. I have never written any of these pairings except James and Sirius before, so I think that actually helped to invent them anew. I have also never written really smutty femslash before, so I can't tell you how happy I am that it worked.
I also think that the Snape/Regulus was probably the strongest. It certainly flowed the most when writing it. This bratty Regulus took residence in my head for a couple of days and kept saying things.
I cannot tell you how happy and thrilled this lovely review made me. Just thank you so, so much. ♥♥