The writing is so good! "People are dead. Try harder." That added all kinds of gravitas to the work. The pouty!Draco face that follows is my favorite, even more than Draco-hatches-an-excellent-idea face. And Draco's Orphan theory is so funny. "You didn't know better than to befriend the first sad people who crossed your path..." Perfectly Malfoy. And I love how outright pointy he is! lol. I can't wait to find out who you are, even though some others here already recognize your work. Great job!