Yay!! I loved it! It was great how the ending explained the beginning dream... turned me to mush.
I loved your characterizations of both Cho and Luna, and also that they were older and had life experience behind them.
And, sheesh, the sex was hot. And I won't even preface that with, 'it was hot for femmeslash' cuz it was HOT no matter what gender is normally the fave.