lovely, lovely, lovely!!! There's never enough Charlie, so this just made me squee. the fact that it's long, plotty, sexy and well written just makes my day even more. i loved how you worked this pairing and the snarry (all you have to do now is write a snarry fic in this 'verse *is not beyond begging*).
you really had there at the end. I first thought that charlie and draco were leaving the house/visiting the family or something to do the pregnancy thing when the law was repealed. little did i know, you fast forwarded until after the birth of the baby (now that i think of it, that would of been a very abrupt ending and would not have made much sense. there would have been press coverage on an issue like that)! i also loved how you didn't mention which of the boys carried the baby (unless i missed it lol)