Beautifully told story. I loved your Harry and how we viewed him as Teddy viewed him. A legend, somewhat mythical, and distant. And then adding Hermione just popping and feeling no qualms about leaving the letter, let us know there still was a Harry we knew. The explanation for his behaviour was perfect. I absolutely adored Teddy coming home for Christmas and spouting off. It was the perfect voice for an older teenager. Their final coming together was wonderful. Most of all, though, was the pace, and ease in which the story was told. The descriptions were enough to get a strong feel for the mansion and its largeness and loneliness and their interactions true to their personalities.