I really like that you used the same card for these vastly different drawings. In the first, I am intrigued by Severus creeping out of the gates, and especially by the object lying between them. Harry looks worn out in the second drawing, and I love the post-camping untidiness. He looks worldly, and rightly so. I take it that Draco's tears falling on Severus are phoenix-like. His sorrow a sacrifice to bring Severus back, (I hope). if I understand, you are posting a story to accompany these cards? I can't wait to read it.