I absolutely LOVED this fic, beginning to end. Draco was so ... Draco in this, so IC, and so snarky it made me swoon. The fact that he wanted the job to observe Harry's anguish was choice, and his irritation at things not working out how he'd planned was perfect.
Harry, also very much IC, was stubborn and ever the hero, not wanting anyone to risk themselves for him, not even someone whose job it was to do so. The fact that he was his own worst enemy, getting in the way and preventing Draco from doing his job was too funny! *loves*
The UST was fabulous ... carried on for so long that it made me itch for them to finally resolve it. And the way Draco was extra irritated by Ginny and her mauling of Harry was great. And when they finally did resolve all that tension ... yum! So delicious.