Wow...
Well, what can I say? That was amazing, absolutely amazing! I love how you brought in so many degrees of differentness, it was pained, happy, scared, family tied, and in it's own way beautiful. It sheds it's own light on how war changes everybody. You were absoultely brilliant, the writing was great, and very different from what you normally see. I have read so many stories of how Lily fell for James , but this one is how I think it really would've happened. For as you stared war changes people. I loved how protective and happy Lily is at the very end, you truely are amazing! Bravo