I enjoyed this so much! :D Your portrayal of Neville is such a treat. I'd read him with anyone. That said, you 100% sold me on this threesome. All were so in character. There was a line about how Millie would have knocked Myrtle out of the way if she'd been alive, that was just perfect. And yay for Millicent's Slytherin cunning, saving the day. I giggled all the way through this (and there was even some giddy squirming during the threesome scene), but somehow it also managed to be poignant. I could get why Neville had feelings for both of them. Fantastic job!