Very hot, despite the "coldness" of their lovemaking. This was a very creative and amusing story. I loved that Neville got coaching from his friends on what to say to a woman before his date. Your Neville was perfect, not to mention a very lucky man. Since he's concerned, I hope that the he likes what he hears once he manages to have that awkward conversation with Minerva. ;D Lovely story, very enjoyable!