I really liked this! I was rooting for them both from the beginning. But I especially liked the world you created, this different side of the wizarding world that Harry Potter isn't comfortable in and doesn't know what to do with but which, ultimately, doesn't really concern him at all. (Even though it does.) I liked it that Millicent couldn't just heal him like we've gotten used to with Mme Pomfrey around, that she's building her life like anybody struggling to run a shop, and that her position in society because of being a Slytherin can be felt. And I liked this Dudley, too. :)